The season alters imperceptibly;
No point exact which demonstrates the turn.
Yet soon come changes which our eyes can see
Leaves dry and crack, the acers seem to burn.
And so it is with human beings too.
Each day our loved one looks the same to us
And yet the body alters like leaves do.
Small changes made with neither noise nor fuss.
We change into transparent ghosts of self
Thus totter down the avenue of life
Soon death approaches with its common stealth.
And separates the husband and the wife.
In winter all is black and we despair
Yet deep in earth,worms silently repair

Excellent! But for the metre in the line…’Slightly subtly and without a fuss.’….the Sonnet will conform almost perfectly to the Classic Shakespearean Sonnet……With its Iambic Pentameter and rhyming format… 😉 Hugs! 🙂
Thanks for that.. will have a look at it.:)xx
Would be super when you adjust the line….Hugs! ❤