Slant rhymes

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http://literarydevices.net/half-rhyme/

Example #3

That is no country for old men. The young
In one another’s arms, birds in the trees
– Those dying generations – at their song,
The salmon-falls, the mackerel-crowded seas,
Fish, flesh, or fowl, commend all summer long
Whatever is begotten, born, and dies.
Caught in that sensual music all neglect
Monuments of unageing intellect.
(W. B. Yeats, “Sailing to Byzantium”)

I have tried in my way not to flee

Grey Tube Shelter 1940 by Henry Moore OM, CH 1898-1986
Grey Tube Shelter 1940 Henry Moore OM, CH 1898-1986 Presented by the War Artists Advisory Committee 1946 http://www.tate.org.uk/art/work/N05706

Like the words of a liar
Like the  demons in a midnight sewer
We’ve  all tried ,in our way, not to be.
Like the girls  who despair
Like  wet wood in a midnight fire
We have tried many ways not to see
Like the twists of all  liars
Like a hank of midnights dire
We have tried and have failed to set free.
Like St Joan in the fire
Like an old lag in  a prison cure
I have tried, in my way, not to flee

Like the words of a liar.

 

Like the words of a liar
Like a  drunk in a midnight sewer
We have tried ,in our way. not to be.
The USA have  opted out of  respiration.
For too long, they worried on
Don’t breathe for them,Carolina
“Enhance”  truth to the ends  above
A hard pain’s gonna wail.
[The  hard pane’s  writ in braille.]
Life is what happens when reason’s making other demands.
My sweet bard.Realty wanna owe you.
Wednesday mourning.
Plenty pain  is in my tears from out my eyes.
Lover,lover ,who to bother?
Kyrie Eleison,Greek won’t save the Union.
Did Jesus have a rabid twister?
Beware of Jung’s pearls
A Freudian slip brings up lingerie profit.Thanks, Mark
Facebook helped The Knave in and out

Hineni, Hineni

Leonard Cohen died
Ronald  Trump rose
Leonard Cohen mused
Ronald Trump lied
They’ll be singing in heaven
They’ll be singing in hell.
Hineni, Hineni
Sing for your soul

Oh, Jesus Christ died
And he rose as well.
That story’s  better
An idiot can tell.

Were we misled
And the devils all yelled
Gotchya all,babies.
The whole world is hell.

Well,does it get better
Does it get worse?
Europe is shattered
By a serial curse.

30 million people
Killed by the King
Hitler and Stalin
How can we sing?

Russia is moving
America’s bust.
Keep hold of your spirits
Let the children  out first.

The instinct for death
The instinct for life
Keep your card handy
You can’t use it twice.

Dignity’s own dance

What did she convey when she moved thus
A branch of willow bending to the lake?
So eloquent the gesture,with no fuss;
So brief , yet   there,  an image I could take.
We dance with gestures, often seen and shared;
With awkwardness as  over desks we’ve bowed.
Yet in these movements , our deep self is bared
And  given dignity when  none’s allowed
For as there is no name for this, our form;
No vigilante’s listed it as sin
And so our human dance goes on and on
From what is now and what  once might have been.
We are all partner’s in the earthly dance,
From serendip to  glorious happenstance

P.C?

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The problem seems to me that we were supposed to be  politically correct and so not give voice to things like racism and speaking about women is an  offensive way.But like many imposed solutions it didn’t work very well as it merely hid how some people,mainly  white men, really felt.The change would have to come from a deeper place. and take longer to  become genuine.And women are partly to blame for marrying rich men merely to get access to wealth.We do need  men who are willing to support a family should they choose to have one,but not to go or the richest  men around  who  will be very dominant.

Can he be kind?

Is the demagogue  a demi-god?
Are anxieties eased by  backing  fools?
What will he next  use as his new rod?
With what connections will he  come to rule?

Democracy’s not served by baying mobs.
Yet how can such a man have risen high?
Seems almost like a robbery,  smash and grab.
His friends have altered truth till it now lies.

We tremble, wondering what the future holds.
We shudder , wondering who will bear the pains.
And is there something odd in lies so bold?
What   folly gave him  powers he wished to gain?

We live from hour to hour   with saddened minds
For to the poor and lost ,can he be kind?

The path

As I walk this  path edged by  thin trees
I see  a mile  of fields all ripe with wheat
Despite the heat, I feel a gentle breeze.

I like to sit by trees ,in summer heat.
The leaves make little fans lit up by sun
So shaded by the trees I love to meet.

I like to greet my friends,  just one by one
I like to share but not  to    yell and fight
Then conversation deep can linger on.

In winter there’s a different, slanted light
It makes long  shadows  from  the trees  stretch out
There’s sharper  contrast,  black  encounters white.

What is this world when nature cannot shout
Her signals are emitted but ignored
A politician now is  more a lout.

On Dover Beach ,great waves roar to the shore
Just as Arnold wrote  so long ago
But what’s transmitted worries me far more.

The tyrant in the USA’s another  blow
His emblem  is ingratitude or gore
From this election who knows what will grow?

 
What fools we are to  ravage  and to tear
What aggressive acts  must all now bear?
As I walk the   path edged by  live trees
Despite the heat, my soul and body freeze

Who Never Lost by Emily Dickinson

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Who never lost, are unprepared
A Coronet to find!
Who never thirsted
Flagons, and Cooling Tamarind!

Who never climbed the weary league –
Can such a foot explore
The purple territories
On Pizarro’s shore?

How many Legions overcome –
The Emperor will say?
How many Colors taken
On Revolution Day?

How many Bullets bearest?
Hast Thou the Royal scar?
Angels! Write “Promoted”
On this Soldier’s brow!

Look, Stranger by Auden

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    Look, stranger, on this island now
The leaping light for your delight discovers,
Stand stable here
And silent be,
That through the channels of the ear
May wander like a river
The swaying sound of the sea.
Here at a small field’s ending pause
Where the chalk wall falls to the foam and its tall ledges
Oppose the pluck
And knock of the tide,
And the shingle scrambles after the suck-
-ing surf, and a gull lodges
A moment on its sheer side.Far off like floating seeds the ships
Diverge on urgent voluntary errands,
And this full view
Indeed may enter
And move in memory as now these clouds do,
That pass the harbour mirror
And all the summer through the water saunter

Discover the different types of rhyme

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http://www.dailywritingtips.com/types-of-rhyme/

 

Slant Rhymes (sometimes called imperfect, partial, near, oblique, off etc.)
Rhyme in which two words share just a vowel sound (assonance – e.g. “heart” and “star”) or in which they share just a consonant sound (consonance – e.g. “milk” and “walk”). Slant rhyme is a technique perhaps more in tune with the uncertainties of the modern age than strong rhyme. The following example is also from Seamus Heaney’s “Digging” :

Between my finger and my thumb
The squat pen rests; snug as a gun

 

Eye Rhymes
Rhyme on words that look the same but which are actually pronounced differently – for example “bough” and “rough”. The opening four lines of Shakespeare’s Sonnet 18, for example, go :

Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer’s lease hath all too short a date:

Here, “temperate” and “date” look as though they rhyme, but few readers would pronounce “temperate” so that they did. Beware that pronunciations can drift over time and that rhymes can end up as eye rhymes when they were originally full (and vice versa).

Is it really a cliche?

  •  A  faker’s dozing in the ink but it’s invisible
    Pass the quake,she muttered.
  • Rolled lace briars surrounded her  new home
  • What is strife to me without thee?
  • Quail on chain, free to a good nun
  • The wall is round  your tart,sire
  • Never ask why.
    Why?
  • The whole brawl of axes hit me at once.I died.[Sept  2007]
  • Balls pout,you know.
    Why am I so crude?
  • Balls pinned to the wall decorated  the new kitchen
  • Their balls  fell off as they entered
  • Nunk ate the missal
  • It’s your numeral.
  • Sauce  of life found in Middle East.
  • Truncate your senten
  • Keep your briefs.
  • Keep it taut.
  • Cain and Abel never left.
  •  Getting together to treat the Gods was a bad idea.
  • Don’t sand down worms with my nail file.
  • Can I bend a penny here,please?
  • Where is the harlot?
  • She  wanted the queue.
    Lord for tomorrow  and its bleeds.
  • Handy words staggered out of the library
  • Who are you,anyday?
  • Hanging  on  till a drought,he drowned
  • Stranging your head  with a brick ball on a  leather chord
  • I’ll shrink about that later.
    I’ll just shrink
  • Baptism of  new liars after Mass
  • Bare bones hung from the roof surrounded by pairs of balls in golden bags.
  • Care faced liar needed,
  • Enlarged bin killed lady in her own kitchen
  • Barge frightened  tin of sardines
  • Barking  is sad for cats
  • Barking up the song tree, he was rejected by the choir
  • Barking up the wrong she  he got nowhere
  • A flared piece of beef was baked in the  geometric   loving
  • Casket Case is a mere euphemism.
  • A brick case  is useful for laptops
    A new  base look is desired
  • He passed  back words  and annoyed tutors
  • Pat A Euclid today.
  • A nuke  head?
  • Is that all rite?
  • Past the idea around the  lake
  • Baited wreath suitable for a  Ted Hughes free to a good home
  • Cats in the belfry played so well the Vicar is frilled with delight