About poetry forms and writing better

 

 

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Great poets convey the theme of their poems aptly and beautifully. There is something special about them.

But what makes them so special?

Are they God-gifted or do they learn poetry writing skills? Both. Let’s look at the latter, poetry writing skills. To acquire poetry writing skills, one must read and write poetry regularly. However, it also helps to know a few things about poetry, such as…

Poetry Writing Forms ..see article in full

Freud is showing us how conscience obscures self-knowledge

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By Adam Phillips

Freud is showing us how conscience obscures self-knowledge, intimating indeed that this may be its primary function: when we judge the self it can’t be known; guilt hides it in the guise of exposing it. This allows us to think that it is complicitous not to stand up to the internal tyranny of what is only one part – a small but loud part – of the self. So frightened are we by the super-ego that we identify with it: we speak on its behalf to avoid antagonising it (complicity is delegated bullying). But in arguing with his conscience, in trying to catch it, with such eloquence and subtlety, Hamlet has become a genius of self-reproach; his conversations with himself and others about conscience allow him to speak in ways no one had ever quite spoken before.

The poet Billy Collins puts it well I think. On reading fiction he says: “I see all of us reading ourselves away from ourselves, straining in circles of light to find more light until the line of words becomes a trail of crumbs that we follow across a page of fresh snow…”

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http://www.cam.ac.uk/research/discussion/why-do-we-read-and-write-novels

 

“Albert Camus in his book The Rebel [L’Homme revolté]. Camus says that all artwork is a demand for unity, a ‘reconciliation of the unique with the universal’, an imposition of order on our chaotic, closed and very limited experiences of the world. His core idea is that narrative art organises life in such a way that we can reflect on it from a distance, experience it anew and deny the transient nature of the everyday.  Following Camus, I think fiction lets us press pause, rewind, zoom in, zoom out; it creates a space for us to think ourselves and our world in novel ways – to be titillated, frightened, disgusted, amused and surprised – often at ourselves – and meaningfully and distinctly from television or film, have significant control over that experience, to work with the author rather than be worked on by the author.

HT:  Yes, I agree with Malachi and with Camus’s answer.  Someone once said to me that it’s easy to recognise the people who don’t read fiction as their outlook on life is narrower and less imaginative, and they find it hard to put themselves in other people’s shoes. A generalisation, but with elements of truth.  The power of fiction begins with fairy tales, nursery rhymes and picture books  giving children ways of looking at the world and outside themselves.  As we grow up, ‘the compact between reader and writer’, working with the author, is a powerful personal and shared experience, and in recent years a more public experience with the meteoric rise of book groups.   The poet Billy Collins puts it well I think. On reading fiction he says: “I see all of us reading ourselves away from ourselves, straining in circles of light to find more light until the line of words becomes a trail of crumbs that we follow across a page of fresh snow…”

Too sudden

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I hate the shock of the doorbell early
I’m still half dreaming
Then I have to shout to the postman
I lie down again to get back  into my body
I am still in   a dream  about Ealing
I think for a moment there is someone in the other room
Then I remember.
At least I don’t have to worry about
How my mood might affect them
If I have a mood,that is.
Do we always have a mood?
I wonder why I don’t fill a flask with tea
I used to do one for both of us after washing up.
I open my  eyes and sit looking out of the window
I drink tea and ignore the newspaper.
It’s a bit hard to read that print.
Then a rush of gladness comes in.
Even now I smell the earth under the city streets.
I imagine cats prowling around the trees
Maybe a tortoise forgot to hibernate.
Where’s the robin?
Nature, not human, sustains.
Shapes and patterns of sunlight on the walls
I turn to you
You have left me.

Writing poetry may help emotional turmoil

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http://www.telegraph.co.uk/culture/culturenews/4630043/AAAS-Writing-poems-helps-brain-cope-with-emotional-turmoil-say-scientists.html

 

“In another trial, writing was used in conjunction with exposure therapy for people who had a phobia of spiders.

It was discovered that writing about their fears actually boosted the effect of the therapy compared with people who did not put pen to paper.

“We do think that it has clinical applications,” Dr Lieberman said.

“People expressing negative emotional responses in words while being exposed gave them greater attenuation (reduction) of fear.”

Dr Lieberman said that the effect was negated if the writing was too vivid or descriptive because it led to people reliving their trauma. Also, typing was not as good as writing long-hand.

“You have to write about it in a detached way,” he said.

Asked why writers were often troubled souls, he said that the writing itself may be a reaction to severe emotional problems.

“I am sure that it is one of their motivators to write,” he said. “You have to ask yourself what they would be like without the writing.”

Why do people read and write novels?

 

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http://www.cam.ac.uk/research/discussion/why-do-we-read-and-write-novels

TB: Until some neuroscientist cracks it, it’s an open question. We’re evolutionarily hardwired to look for patterns, for meaning; we crave narrative. This is a hindrance when unchecked but it’s also an incredible gift. Fiction brings you to places, emotionally and imaginatively, which you never otherwise would have visited. The psychologist Steven Pinker wondered once that, maybe, fiction is a kind of empathy technology. I like that. In its construction I think fiction is a skilled dreaming, and the story we construct in and from the dream is presented as a subtle thesis: given this set of people and this set of circumstances, this will happen. It’s a claim by the writer about the nature of some aspect of humanity, and that’s no small thing. The audacity of that is arresting; if you stick with me for the whole story, then it’s probably because you agree with me, you think, ‘Yeah, that’s how it is, you’ve told me the truth.’ And the truth is powerful.

Titles of online articles I have seen [I have not read all the articles]

How to handle things.[what sort ?}

How to cope in a crisis … catch a train to Aberdeen?

Why  or how your finger length  reveals your gender [Take a ruler on a date]

Which microwave to buy [Making  unstated assumptions;some of us either have none or plan to steal  one]

Why you need both metal and silicon whisks.[Seems so obvious]

Why you need to keep  lots of frozen pasta in your kitchen [Try turning off the radiator first and checking the ovens]

Which  six cookery books are the best? [Look up restaurants on your smartphone  instead] I wonder how many this person has checked.I find ones written for catering colleges are better and cheaper.

Why you should never take  a bath [I find a handbag is quite sufficient].

How to  entertain at home. [Fall out of bed?][ Fall into bed]

How to keep your husband happy [Freeze him?]

Why you should never forget your wedding anniversary [Am I married?]

How to have the best number of children [ Yes, it’s all under our total control]

How to keep your teeth  super clean [Stop eating and die?]

Are you bored of sex? [No,I’m bored of the city ]

How to cure loneliness. [Buy a microwave and some cookery books]

How to get your bounce back [Buy a dunlopillo mattress?]

Should you take vitamins? [Where to?]

How to cure your cat. [Is it a ham?]

How to shred wheat. [ Buy Weetabix?]

How to catch cold [open the cat flap?]

Coincidentally

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Coincidentally,words beginning with a hard k sound are found funnier than other words except for words starting with G
So get Garry’s cricket gear out from  the kitchen cupboard and crack his brain  to  guarantee  he’ll sign a contract.Gorillas are getting more intelligent but the kitchen cupboard keeps getting crowded ;it’s Christmas and my glass bowls are under the grill pan gathering grease and crumbs. I’ve got to say,going away for Xmas  is growing on me as I gather more gorillas are converting and the Kirk can’t cope constantly.

 

Was that funny?

Sweep it

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No matter how often I sweep it, the kitchen floor is full of things like a jar of mustard,a pen, a tea towel and the Financial Times
I was stood there looking at it, then I picked up ten tins of tomatoes and threw them at it,screaming
How do you like this? Start putting stuff away NOW

How to bring humour into your writing

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Mike Flemming 2016

 

http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/how-to-mix-humor-into-your-writing

 

Learning the Basics of Subtle Humor

Let’s be clear: The goal in adding some humor to your nonfiction project is not about becoming the next Erma Bombeck or David Sedaris (unless that’s your dream). The goal is to improve your writing by using all the tools available to you, including comedy. Imagine where the original authors of the For Dummies book franchise would be today if they hadn’t decided to take a lighthearted approach.

Whether or not you consider yourself a funny person, it’s not as difficult as you—might think to put humor to work for you. I’ve found that the easiest and best ways of doing so boil down to five simple comedic tools.

1. THE K RULE
It may sound strange, but it’s true: Words with the k sound (Cadillac, quintuplet, sex) are perceived as the funniest, and words with a hard g (guacamole, gargantuan, Yugo) create almost as many grins. This may be because much of what makes Americans laugh today has roots in Yiddish humor, the language of which includes many guttural sounds—and the k and hard g are as close as English comes. The K Rule is so widely used by comedy writers that Matt Groening’s team once referenced it in an episode of “The Simpsons” when Sideshow Mel explained that Krusty (note spelling) the Clown had laryngitis from “trying to cram too many k sounds into a punch line.”

The K Rule is a good convention for naming things and making word choices that will subconsciously or subtly amuse your readers. This tool is especially handy in crafting attention-grabbing titles or subheads. Consider this memorable section heading in the book You Staying Young: The Owner’s Manual for Extending Your Warranty by Michael F. Roizen and Mehmet C. Oz: “Your Memory: Don’t Fuggedaboudit.”

Peter Ustinov

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Mike Flemming 2016

 

Choose your Priorities: Learning at the Feet of the Master

 

“Peter Ustinov, the brilliant raconteur could hold audiences spell-bound in his West End one-man shows. One of his favourite subjects was Russian farmers’ great love of tractors. Although a multi-linguist, he was funniest in non-verbal communication. He could, for example, mimic the sound of a Russian tractor. He would have audiences in hysterics as he rode an imaginary tractor on stage. One of his memorable illustrations was of an advert from a Soviet agricultural magazine, “Farmer seeks wife. Wife must own tractor. If interested, please send photo… of tractor.”

Will they see his wild duplicity?

Who  or what can rise from Jesus’ grave
When holiness  has been destroyed or died
In what blessed water shall we bathe?
If there be a judgement,who is tried?

The rich got richer,what a cliche here!
The poor and humble infected  in their will
We are no better, they  have made it clear
They will accept no more and yearn to kill.

Who’s destroyed   they  care not as they push
Our so called culture nearer to the brink
Indeed they seem to feel an intense rush
To raise up fools who can’t use pen and ink.

Is it LSD or ecstasy?
Will they see  his wild duplicity

And he said,let there be light

 

Oh,light bulb foreseen by our God
Save us all from darkness’ rod
You are our Saviour as foretold
In prophecy  by ancients  bold.
We will worship you at night
When sunken is the sun so bright.
We’ll watch TV and kindle fire
No more to play shall we aspire.
We’ll wear ourselves out watching screens,
As ,from a can, we eat  baked beans
We’ll send for pizzas with our phones
With which we never feel alone.
We might talk to our partner dear
Though to text is easier.
We see the  neon street lights gleam
Where once we saw the moon’s cold beams
And in bed we read our books
With a kindle or a nook
We put beneath out pillows fair
I phones which   we long to hear
Can one have too much new light?
From technology some take flight
For gone are seasons, and their fruit
As our computer we reboot.
New potatoes all year round
Avocados    once quite rare
Now are seem ‘most everywhere.
Melons,grapes and fresh green peas
As the birds sing,life’a breeze.
Oh light bulb,fluorescent tube
Electric candle, trapped by boob.
We thank you for extended days
Maybe we’ll find time for prayers.
God is great  in mystery
From his bosom  we should  flee.

On this ground, the Holy Spirit died.

Once the Soviet troops were welcome there
In Auschwitz   thousands.millions disappeared.
The Soviet Army came  in  winter’s  chill
Nazis were advised to speed their cull

It was not only  Jews    gassed daily  there
Gypsies,plotters  also disappeared.
Can Christian faith   permit such  genocide?
On this ground, the Holy Spirit died.

What God exists depends  upon our minds;
When we choose evil,   what God can we find?
The end of Christianity came here,
As Christ was killed again   in chamber bare

God is dead to us for we have sinned
Against the Holy Spirit whom we killed

That bleeding bomb

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When I was young and not yet here
I had a problem with my fear.
My mother’d not known what to do
And I kept running to the loo
At last the doctor’s mind was clear
They sent me to a nuclear seer.

The man looked up, the man looked down
I’d never seen him in the town
He asked me if I had bad dreams
Or ruined my sleep with howls and screams
I never knew quite how to say:
The nuclear bomb might go astray.

They told us what to take inside
The nuclear shelter, where we’d hide
Tampax weren’t allowed as they
Might break our hymens on the way
So we had our bags of big white pads
As seeing our blood ‘d dismay the lads

We must lie down in the hedgerows
But not day dream or take a doze.
In our mill towns we had no hedge
It was a metaphor I grudged.
Clutching bags of bloody cloths,
We would come out and see God’s wrath.

On the nuclear fires we’d burn
The sanitary towels society spurned.
I hope before the bomb comes back
The Bishops will permit some slack
For tampax are so small and neat
Our bin would have an odour sweet

We might be turned into grey ash
And our hymens all out-blast
We’d never know our clitoris
By a lover’s soft caress
So get together while you can
Before they drop that bloody bomb

Hymns and other sentences

O God our help in rages past,we’ll mope in tears to come
Praise to the Sword,the Almighty,the King of Destruction.
As I parked down the road  upset and dumb.
Wrath of our fathers living still.
Guardian angels set heaven alight.
Dear St Joseph,you were simple.
Oy vey ,Maria.
Our Father,whose heart’s in Devon
Do you my revision and I’ll burst into song.
All natures of a blog are wrong.
Comfort me with your hisses
Three nice men.
There were leopards abiding in the fields.
God bless our hope

It has occurred to me that some of the saints of the Christian church were not Christian;Mary the mother of Jesus and Josepph possibly his father and John the baptist were  not Christians.I said to a friend that Jesus was not a Christian ; he was, she said,  as he was baptised by John the Baptist.So does that make John the founder of Christianity?Then again,why should it be rational?

For we need not answer ill with ill

When true love’s gone and doom hangs overhead
When life runs like a river to the sea
Then shall I take new lovers to my bed?
And with their carnal touch consoled be?

When my love lies,so breaks my tender heart.
When life seems grey and rocks bestrew my path.
Then, shall I my life of evil start?
And on the world shall I bestow my wrath?

When true love lies and wrecks all loyalty.
When puzzlement makes all my world seem
Then I shall upend causality
And  charge  myself  to do  what makes folk glad.

For we need not answer ill with ill
I turn towards goodness  with a better will

 

 

 

This is the circus of despairing clowns

This is the circus  of despairing clowns
Where manic comics hang themselves  at dawn
This is the place where hearts are always down.

This is the place where love cannot be found
Despite the sunshine on the fine green lawn
This is the circus  of despairing clowns

This is the place where tarts wear wedding gowns
This is  the  Camp where  Jews were  oven thrown
This is a place where hearts must cease or drown.

This is a place where evil black dogs frown
This is the place where love  is  rarely found
This is the circus  of despairing clowns

This is the place where evil seems to win
This is the place where rooks  foretell in caws
This is the place where  good was  overthrown.

From this place all mercy has  long gone
With  rulers  strident on their  standing stones.
This is the place where love hides underground
In  the  detritus of despairing clowns

Love will outdo death..

Fat from the madding rowdy crowds
with you I long to be.
Away from noise and music loud
My soul desires to pray.

As palms were waved  and smiles blazed free
Jesus came to town.
Yet soon a different sight they’d see…
And hear the deathly groans.

From joy to woe we humans pass
From one hour to  the next.
For sins and troubles do harass…
And our dear hearts are vexed…

Yet we are told that in the end
Love will outdo death..
And so we beg for grace to lend
To us the strength to last.

This is the winter solstice of dismay.

No wind,no sun,no storm,just   foolish grey
The clouds are shaded  with a yellowish tone
This is  the  winter solstice  of dismay

Our  blind leaders  with white sticks  go stray.
And in  the  darkness I hear human groans.
No  truth,no sight,no mercy,  dull and grey

Where fools decide what motives to display
And hide  like   insects under  heavy stones
This is  the  winter solstice  of dismay.

We   make-believe our souls  in heaven will play
Yet, round  Belsen, ghosts still   sieve  Jews’ bones
No  thoughts no angst,no  worry,just   cool grey

Can we buy our ethics on E bay?
Can we tell if we are never shown?
Is this  the   sunless solstice  of dismay?

When we rise our faces are still drawn.
In  depressive winters,  there’s no dawn
No saviour,sun,no spirit ,just  this grey
This is  the  winter solstice  of dismay.

Love in order to forget

 

“If you want to forget something or someone, never hate it, or never hate him/her. Everything and everyone that you hate is engraved upon your heart; if you want to let go of something, if you want to forget, you cannot hate.”
― C. JoyBell C.
I think  this means acceptance.

Therapeutic writing

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 Mike Flemming 2016

I have doubts about whether writing poetry is always therapeutic because it can draw up memories from the unconscious mind.So it depends on how bad your memories are.

http://psychcentral.com/blog/archives/2015/01/19/the-power-of-writing-3-types-of-therapeutic-writing/

 

Pen poetry. “Poetry is a natural medicine; it is like a homeopathic tincture derived from the stuff of life itself ––your experience,” writes John Fox in Poetic Medicine: The Healing Art of Poem-Making.

But it also can be intimidating. Here’s an exercise from Fox’s book to ease into writing poetry:

  • Make a list of images from your childhood. Pick the ones that have positive memories. “Treat them like snapshots you might look through after many years,” Fox writes. Recall the sensations you experienced — what you saw, smelled, heard, felt and tasted. “Absorb the image into your body — feel as if you are reliving the remembered image.” Describe your experience quickly.
  • Write down the emotions associated with these images, such as “wonder about flight” or “love and sadness for the hurt of a creature.”
  • Write a poem using the details you’ve collected. “Stay in touch with your senses as you focus on your image; listen for the voice of the image; and then express the feeling drawn from your primary image.” Show the feeling in your poem instead of labeling it as ha