I am studying poetic forms.
http://www.criticalreading.com/poetry.htm
In general the limerick is a humorous form.That is,both historically and by the shape and brevity.Yet I am trying to write some miserable limericks.I am finding it harder than I expected.The first one certainly has come out with more than a hint of fun
AS BROAD AS IT’S WIDE
I once had therapeutic depression
The counsellor wept through my session
So I gave my advice
As broad as it’s wise.
Depression sure beats going fishin’
ANXIOUS
I feel very anxious today
Would I do better to worry or to pray?
I’ll trust in the dark
Tn the bush by the park.
Till a man comes along feeling gay.
I see the very nature of the form almost makes it compulsory to be funny.It’s lines 4 and 5 I think
NEW FRIEND
I hate my new man friend already
I thought he would make me more steady
But I feel giddy and sick
When he gives me a lick.
Such a dog’s not ideal for a lady.
