
Rhythmic poetry echoes our own rhythms
The way the heart beats and the flow of blood.
Music is biology at play
The joy of being alive is well and good
There is no no need for willpower and its strains
Does the River have to push itself?
Does the tide need training who could tell?
Imitating these is poetrys stealth.
Overwork is easy but it’s wrong.
Distracks us from the pain of life and death
Both can come together in a song
Let your mind be vacant till you find
The evidence that there is another mind

Thank you,David. You are always very encouraging so I am glad when I see that you have made a comment m
It’s always a great pleasure to read your work.
Thank you so much David. You are a great encouragement to me to keep going because sometimes I wonder what I am doing and whether it’s worthwhile. I think it is and it’s wonderful to meet other people like yourself.
I don’t like Stephen king’s novels but I like Stephen king himself a lot because I read his book called on writing and I admire him profoundly. I wonder what you think of him?
Katherine
Very nice, educational and so well writtten. You’re very talented.