Where have all the rhymes gone?

https://www.huffingtonpost.com/john-lundberg/why-dont-poems-rhyme-anym_b_97489.html

 

“Most contemporary poets take a mixed stance on free verse versus formalism. There’s a general feeling that metrical, rhyming verse strikes the ear little too harshly these days, but poets haven’t abandoned form altogether. Poets make use of subtler techniques like internal rhyme (rhyming within, rather than at the end, of lines) and slant rhymes (words that almost rhyme like “black” and “bleak”). Most poets still write with a music, but it’s far more varied (and usually more subtle) than music typical of traditional verse.

I think most poets would also agree that you don’t have to use rhyme and meter to write a great poem. Take the well-known word-thing This Is Just to Say by William Carlos Williams.

I have eaten

the plums

that were in

the icebox

and which

you were probably

saving

for breakfast

Forgive me

they were delicious

so sweet

and so cold

If that doesn’t protect “the beauty and precision of the English Language,” I don’t know what does.

Still find yourself a fierce proponent of poetic purity? You’re welcome to join the QES at the New Cavendish Club in London every other Thursday. And who doesn’t enjoy a brisk debate about grammatical standards! Trust me, one might ensue. The QES’s wikipedia entry—and I guarantee you they are all over their wikipedia entry—states “a commitment to standards should not preclude the possibility of grammatical change; nor does it mean, however, that change should be mindlessly celebrated for its own sake.”

Mindless celebrating! Dare they forget how they got booted from Old Cavendish!

The tree of life

We are little leaves upon the tree
We  never did control our  tiny worlds
The tree of life; what power, what  mystery

With metaphor, it’s easier to see
Life is tender, see each leaf unfurl
We are only leaves upon the tree

Singing in the sun we seem to be
Full of joy until the storm winds swirl
The tree of life; what power, what  mystery

Extinguished   candles   smoke at Tenebrae
We are blown to death however bold
We are little leaves upon the tree

Thus we sacrifice to God uncertainly
Yet as the wars continue, we grow cold
The tree of life; what power, what  mystery

Who has dropped us from the hands that hold?
Who has stolen certainty untold?
We are little leaves upon the tree
The tree of life; what power, what  mystery

Their names changed

  • 400-111525-3.jpgJim Brown was in his new conservatory admiring the windows he had just
    polished.His 82nd birthday was coming up in a few days
    Marie,his stunningly attractive yet irritable,nasty and over educated
    wife,a leading authority on Wittgenstein and most likely suffering from
    Asperger’s syndrome into the bargain,….oh a cliche prone author too—!
    had made a huge whole orange cake and planned a large gathering of friends
    to celebrate his survival for so long whilst married to her,not easy she
    knows.
    He heard a sharp tapping on the door.
    There lay Lucy their next door neighbour spying through the key hole.
    “Are you on your own?” she queried tersely yet rudely.
    “No, yet I’m suffering from chronic existential anxiety” Bill lied politely.
    “Well,I just saw Martina on her second hand Raleigh bike going to the
    market or the Charity Shop or possibly leaving home for ever….”
    “Well,I still have the cat here”,he whispered loudly as if he were free
    associating in a dream
    “Let me in and make me some coffee” she asked courteously,
    “She’s an odd one” the cat Emile thought naughtily.
    “Where’s my Carnation cat milk?”
    “Real or instant?” Simon answered suavely yet naturally.
    “Won’t it wash off your brand new coral lipstick from Chanel of Paris?…
    not to mention your factor 60 sunblock.”
    “God’s whiskers” she murmured quaintly to herself.
    “How does he know it’s Chanel?
    Is he a spy or what?
    Is he in M.I.5?”
    John got some instant coffee and debated whether to put in a little LSD to
    add some visions to their morning!No,a short breathing exercise would do
    he concluded after 9 minutes of obsessive anxiety.
    He sat down in his favorite old wooden Habitat chair having poured the
    coffee into some old plastic mugs.
    “Did you know Habitat is going b..b bankrupt?” she brightly stuttered
    turning pink with happiness and the menopause which so far had lasted over
    30 years.
    Suddenly Lucy sat down on Bert’s lap and began to kiss his right eyelid
    “Careful, my darling!” he muttered insensibly.
    He was savouring the annoyingly uncommon pleasure when the chair fell to
    pieces as it frequently did at such times, throwing the elderly but
    versatile and experienced couple down onto the new Mary Quant patterned
    pure New Zealand lambswool carpet.Suddenly they heard the peal of Mary’s
    bicycle bell.Shortly she walked into the room carrying 78 bags of
    groceries for the birthday party.
    “What’s going on here ?” she murmured seductively in a piercing shriek.
    “I’m so sorry, Jenny, please accept my apologies, he has this thing about
    chairs.It’s a fetish ,I  believe,   according to Sinald Floyd.””
    “Have you got your mobile?” shrieked Tom agonisedly in a  loud whisper.
    ”I can’t get up.” he screamed softly.”Am I dead?”
    “What cannot stand up must forever remain lying down” As my old philosophy tutor at Cambridge used to say, muttered Marty.
    “Why, that’s bit extreme,” said Jane uneasily yet gallantly.
    .”MY tutor said “Who cannot speak must forever remain silent.”
    “Oh,who was your tutor?”
    “Elizabeth Ansconbe!” Amy admitted furtively.”She knew Wittgetensin well.”
    “Mine was Iris Murdoch!” called out Alf.
    Later they heard a silent siren.It was the emergency ambulance.
    Dick, the paramedic bounded into the room.
    “It’s this chair”  said Marie urbanely.
    “Can you mend it for me? My husband can’t manage without it!”
    “Anything else, madam?” Rick queried anxiously.
    “Any coal to fetch in,tins to open, blocked toilets?”
    “Later maybe.”
    Danny looked at Joan.
    “Your eyes look like two deep pools in the Caspian sea.”
    he whispered into her left ear.
    “Are you on another creative writing course?”she quipped urbanely.
    “Yes, we’re on eyes at the moment; what colour is that eyeshadow you have
    on.”
    “This is called winter teal” She admitted uneasily yet seductively.
    “Did you know I’m a transvestite?” he admitted happily her.
    “Yes”,she replied dishonestly.Kitty like to give an impression of
    omniscience owing to her ontological insecurity and her ignorance of
    theology and also her narrowly trained mathematical mind.
    Unfortunately, that frequently gave men the wrong impression.
    Mamie cried out to Al,
    “Get on with it,my sweetie!” So he took out a big tube of glue from his
    jeans’ pocket and set to work reconstructing the chair.
    “Oh,dear, Stewart looks a bit odd”
    “!No,he looks quite prime to me.”
    “Is he an integer?!”
    “No, he’s a transcendental real number”
    “He’s a number all right.”
    “Never mind, we’ve just got new wheelie bins so I’ll put him out with the
    rubbish,”
    Marty joked on hearing Amy’s remarks to Zach.
    But Simon was not yet dead.He merely had fallen asleep.
    He dreamed of his days at Oxgridge University studying illogic and unreason
    with Rudolphina Catnap, the famous female philosopher.Oh, happy, happy days!
    Danny made the ladies some Ceylon tea in the fabulous oak kitchen with its
    pure linen curtains in raspberry beige. and its black enamel sink with
    matching double oven and microwave.”Why no halogen?”Iris Murdoch might
    have asked.
    “What is a human life,”he pondered.He was studying logic as well as writing.
    He began to tremble like a leaf in the wind to use a freshly recycled old
    cliche.
    “Help” he called,”I’m having a panic attack.Hurry I’m dying,I believe.I
    need a priest“
    “You can’t have a panic attack,” shouted Marianne
    “Paramedics heal themselves.”
    “Does God heal those who heal themselves he wondered as he lay under a pile
    of broken china?”

    “Where’s the tea?” called the ladies.
    Ah ,if only Wittgenstein were here,he would know,t hought Emile.
    But I disagree.Only God would know that and He won’t say usually as he
    speaks another language known only to the few.Though sometimes one may
    hear it on the wind deep in a thick forest.
    That’s what I believe.
    Here endeth the first lesson… so be off!


Like coloured visions of the ocean bed

 

Thought, the vision of the inner eye,
Peers behind the mask of mundane view
A choosing from the symbols that come by
So into meaning, many words are fused

Thought to me is, vision without words;
Needs silent presentation and review.
The words translate the images that surge
Then fall back to the ocean where they grew.

Like coloured visions of the deep sea bed
Where fishes reel and dance, where life is new.
What we mean with difficulty’s said
Yet evocation summons it to view.

Let my words evoke love deep in you;
Answer me with texts and Bibles new.

He held an ancient prayer book  turned my way

The night came down in  clouds of purple-grey
Though when I was outside it still seemed light
Is this real, my instinct seemed to say.

I saw a Jew in Hotters where he prayed
His skullcap black, his face was very white
The night came down in  clouds of purple-grey

He held an ancient prayer book  turned my way
He looked relaxed yet I was in his sight
Is this real, my instinct seemed to say

I stood, as seeing women may delay
The mood of meditation, be a blight
The night came down in  clouds of purple-grey

I did not walk to him and loudly say
May I take your photo here tonight
Is this sense, my mind looked for delay

For where is David, proud as Cohen wrote
Where Solomon the wise, where his insight?
The night came down in  clouds of purple-grey
Where is Noah ,for the flood’s in play

 

Day shall come again

When red sun  drops and  cooling night  rolls in
The darkness masks both danger and our vision
Ancient minds fear   day won’t come again
Courage for the  delicate   seems thin
We  wrestle  with  our indecision
When   red sun  drops and  deep grey night  rolls in
But now, new stricken by  a sense of sin
Who shall aid the soul’s   derision?
Our  ancient minds fears  day won’t come again
When  we sleep we’re entertained within
Deft dreams squander our   illusions
When bright sun  drops and   fearful night  rolls in
In reveri , we’re loved  as we tune in
So  fancy turns to full communion
While ancient minds fear   day won’t come again.
And so  it was that our own life began
When sperm leaped up in proud confusion.
When  red sun  dropped and  a  new night  rolled in
When  ancient  hearts cried,”Day  shall come again”